Aly's Miscellany

Actually 3.5*
-0.5* the fucking scene: so many anatomically impossible thing happened that it gave me whiplash. A few that I remembered are clenching womb, clenching body and hips spreading[no, not thighs, but hips]
-0.5* for the editting, it needed more
-0.5* for Ryder's POVs which consisted of him thinking about fucking Syn, of him planing ways to fuck her, of him planing to brand her, of him describing her body while he fucks her... you get the gist. He doesn't have many POVs, but it managed to get tedious when I was reading them.